Good ideas but poorly animated.
You should work more on your characters, they were too basic. your backgrounds got better as your story went on. There's alot of room for improvement all around.
To tell you the truth, I didn't really get your story. Maybe adding some more dialog or voices would have helped. It does seem like you put a lot of effort into this. Keep practicing with flash and you will get better.
I think the humor was a little slow paced, The love song was hilarious though!
On another note, what do you use your other program besides flash for? I think everything could have been made in flash and you wouldn't have had all that quality loss. Your sounds seemed to be a little muffled too. Well I hope to see more from you in the future.
so true :)
Animation was ok, the comedy was great. The idea is a little late but I enjoyed it overall. Brings back memories of when I got the game and i didn't have a memory card. Took a while but I finally beat it with out dying :) Hope to see more from you.
Very fun and addicting!
It was a little hard at first but after the second song I started getting the hang of it. I played it with my mouse and my Wacom Tab, had fun with both. The music was good but would have been better with some different styled songs. I was expecting a Robert Johnson "The Sky is Crying" to finish it up but it was still fun. Also the story was well played out but a little slow. I would have cut out the parts where it showed you what chapter you were on to make the story run smoother. Especially since it was a short one.
Overall great job! I hope to see another in the future.
what a nasty scorpion...
not bad :)
Can you say front page?
a good listen.
The end melody reminded me of a Brakenwood flash :)
Thank you very much for your thoughts.
Interesting perception. I appreciate your taking the time to write a review; It is encouraging.
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