Score: 5

"Good ideas but poorly animated."

submission: The Stupid Incident

date: February 2, 2008

You should work more on your characters, they were too basic. your backgrounds got better as your story went on. There's alot of room for improvement all around.
To tell you the truth, I didn't really get your story. Maybe adding some more dialog or voices would have helped. It does seem like you put a lot of effort into this. Keep practicing with flash and you will get better.

~H.E.

Score: 8

"Not bad..."

submission: Shut Up, Cup! Ep. 5

date: February 1, 2008

I think the humor was a little slow paced, The love song was hilarious though!

On another note, what do you use your other program besides flash for? I think everything could have been made in flash and you wouldn't have had all that quality loss. Your sounds seemed to be a little muffled too. Well I hope to see more from you in the future.

~H.E.

Score: 8

"so true :)"

submission: Resident Evil WUN!

date: January 26, 2008

Animation was ok, the comedy was great. The idea is a little late but I enjoyed it overall. Brings back memories of when I got the game and i didn't have a memory card. Took a while but I finally beat it with out dying :) Hope to see more from you.

~H.E.

Score: 7

"A little like David Firth's style."

submission: BirdDog

date: January 23, 2008

I liked it. Music and style went together well. Voices/sounds needed a little work. Still seemed like you pulled a lot of ideas from Firth's work.

Overall good job, hope to see more from you in the future.

~H.E.

Score: 10

"Front Page Material!"

submission: Metropolis Circuit

date: September 7, 2007

Great job on everything. The effort you put into this really shows. Hope to see more from you soon.

~HEFLASH

Score: 10

"Very fun and addicting!"

submission: Headfirst To Hell

date: July 15, 2007

It was a little hard at first but after the second song I started getting the hang of it. I played it with my mouse and my Wacom Tab, had fun with both. The music was good but would have been better with some different styled songs. I was expecting a Robert Johnson "The Sky is Crying" to finish it up but it was still fun. Also the story was well played out but a little slow. I would have cut out the parts where it showed you what chapter you were on to make the story run smoother. Especially since it was a short one.

Overall great job! I hope to see another in the future.

~H.E.

Score: 6

"Nice work but doesn't live up to the original..."

submission: Dad's at Work

date: July 5, 2007

Good ideas but maybe a little too fast paced. Also I thought the music was lacking. Still a good job though. It just didn't all come together like the first one.

Just my opinion,

~H.E.

Score: 10

"I believe you've just raised the bar a little bit."

submission: 1 - The Story of Khale

date: April 3, 2007

Incredible. Great job on everything. Animation was so smooth and great flow with the music. A must watch for all of Newgrounds.

~Hector

Score: 9

"Great submission, orignal, and hilarious..."

submission: Jack Vs. Jack

date: April 3, 2007

The brains flying out of the head at the end was too funny! I liked the Jack from 24 in Lost story better than the Jack from Lost in 24 story, if that makes any sense but good job all around. The only thing that pulled my attention away from the story was the awkward tweening like the jungle trees and plants. Still a good job though! Hope to see more from you.

~Hector

Score: 4

"what a nasty scorpion..."

submission: HogBor

date: September 19, 2006

not bad :)