Good ideas but poorly animated.
You should work more on your characters, they were too basic. your backgrounds got better as your story went on. There's alot of room for improvement all around.
To tell you the truth, I didn't really get your story. Maybe adding some more dialog or voices would have helped. It does seem like you put a lot of effort into this. Keep practicing with flash and you will get better.
I think the humor was a little slow paced, The love song was hilarious though!
On another note, what do you use your other program besides flash for? I think everything could have been made in flash and you wouldn't have had all that quality loss. Your sounds seemed to be a little muffled too. Well I hope to see more from you in the future.
so true :)
Animation was ok, the comedy was great. The idea is a little late but I enjoyed it overall. Brings back memories of when I got the game and i didn't have a memory card. Took a while but I finally beat it with out dying :) Hope to see more from you.
A little like David Firth's style.
I liked it. Music and style went together well. Voices/sounds needed a little work. Still seemed like you pulled a lot of ideas from Firth's work.
Overall good job, hope to see more from you in the future.
Oh you will!
Front Page Material!
Great job on everything. The effort you put into this really shows. Hope to see more from you soon.
Nice work but doesn't live up to the original...
Good ideas but maybe a little too fast paced. Also I thought the music was lacking. Still a good job though. It just didn't all come together like the first one.
Just my opinion,
I believe you've just raised the bar a little bit.
Incredible. Great job on everything. Animation was so smooth and great flow with the music. A must watch for all of Newgrounds.
Great submission, orignal, and hilarious...
The brains flying out of the head at the end was too funny! I liked the Jack from 24 in Lost story better than the Jack from Lost in 24 story, if that makes any sense but good job all around. The only thing that pulled my attention away from the story was the awkward tweening like the jungle trees and plants. Still a good job though! Hope to see more from you.
Wow I really liked this :)
Very smooth animating. Neat the way you changed styles to show the darker side of the story. I would love to see a flash made just in your darker style...
All around great job, keep up the good work!
I liked it...
pretty good, although at times it felt rushed. Seemed like you could have done better with some of the animations. Still enjoyable :)
ya the fat guy part was a lil rushed. i had another thing planned but i scrapped that and went for the man.
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