Vibes when that bass line drops. Awesome.

Good ideas but poorly animated.

You should work more on your characters, they were too basic. your backgrounds got better as your story went on. There's alot of room for improvement all around.
To tell you the truth, I didn't really get your story. Maybe adding some more dialog or voices would have helped. It does seem like you put a lot of effort into this. Keep practicing with flash and you will get better.

~H.E.

Not bad...

I think the humor was a little slow paced, The love song was hilarious though!

On another note, what do you use your other program besides flash for? I think everything could have been made in flash and you wouldn't have had all that quality loss. Your sounds seemed to be a little muffled too. Well I hope to see more from you in the future.

~H.E.

Very fun and addicting!

It was a little hard at first but after the second song I started getting the hang of it. I played it with my mouse and my Wacom Tab, had fun with both. The music was good but would have been better with some different styled songs. I was expecting a Robert Johnson "The Sky is Crying" to finish it up but it was still fun. Also the story was well played out but a little slow. I would have cut out the parts where it showed you what chapter you were on to make the story run smoother. Especially since it was a short one.

Overall great job! I hope to see another in the future.

~H.E.

what a nasty scorpion...

not bad :)

not bad....

Read the side notes so I know you made the game out of bordem but a little music and sound effects wouldn't have hurt. Still fun though, the text being the most enjoyable part!

a good listen.

The end melody reminded me of a Brakenwood flash :)